I wanted to do another edit of the short incorporating the music a little differently. I wanted it to feel less like a music video so I started adding in more sound and have some parts at the beginning and end without music.

The only issue we’re now having is the length, but I felt it was necessary to give all the story elements the attention they need without feeling jammed in. We’re concerned about the number of shots this one will require, so we want to start looking for ways to simplify the story.